Bonjour !
Donc voilà, je suis en seconde et j'ai fait ma demande pour un voyage a Boston tout le mois de juillet et je dois donc écrire une petite lettre de présentation pour ma famille avec des photos. J'ai reçu le courrier hier soir, et il faut que j'envoi le tout avant demain (pour qu'on soit pris sur le fait, anglais improvisé
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Si vous pouviez juste y jetter un coup d'oeil et corriger ce qui est flagrant comme erreur ça serait gentil
Best regards,
Niphares (hum je me suis inspiré de la letre de Poup un tout petit peu
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Donc voila : (le premier paragraphe est a revoir, j'ai du faire ça hier soir et là je profite que mon lycée soit fermé pour la faire!sur ma lettre j'ai eu droit au gros URGENT en rouge
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Dear host family,
As an America’s lover, I ask you my wish to spend three weeks in Boston.
My name is Hochart Séraphin, I’m a 16 year old boy. I live in a small village near Douai in the north of France, called « Féchain » (nearly 2.000 inhabitants).
My parents have a food store in the middle of this little town. The landscape around is composed of greenery and fields, with lot of space but needless to say that there are no cities near, so I have one hour a day in school bus to go to my high school.
I have got a brother called Baptiste, a 19 year old boy who will spend three months in the USA during summer, and my little sister, Marie who’s 11.
My learning course has always succeeded, I joined this first year in high school an “English section” class, so we study the American and England history, culture, way of life, and mainly the language (dialogues and comprehension). We have lot of writing things to do, and some oral tests. In my free time, I love play music, so I’m in a blues/rock band called “The ladybirds”. We make some concerts in the towns around. Moreover, I love chatting on the net with foreign people to discover other ways of thinking. To my mind, it’s very important. Later, I would work in the USA when I will be more oldest, in marketing, or medicine. I’m a calm person, and I love go out with my friends, so I’m sociable and it’s easy to me to adapt me.
This experience would be able to improve my English skills, mostly oral understanding and expression. Spending three weeks in a new country sounds very attractive. It would allow me to discover different societies, people, museums, monuments and culture.
More over, I’ve been in the west coast 2 years ago for my holidays, and it made me love this “American way of life”.
>merci beaucoup !!! (désolé pour le dernier paragraphe, j'ai repris beaucoup quand même
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